How to Write Effective Facebook Sponsored Posts

Want to try something different with your Facebook advertising? Have you considered using text-based sponsored posts?

In this article, you’ll learn how to write and structure two types of longer-form text-based Facebook sponsored posts.

Why Use Long-Form Facebook Sponsored Posts?

A long-form Facebook sponsored post is simply a blog post or landing page within the body of your sponsored post.

Instead of sending readers to blog content on your website and retargeting them with ads to narrow your buying audience, long-form sponsored posts are designed to keep users engaged with your content on Facebook. They prompt the reader to view more with the See More link in the first few lines of the text.

One of the big myths about content is that people have the attention span of a goldfish. In actual fact, multiple studies have proven that when people are engaged, they'll readily consume long-form content.

When it comes to Facebook ads, many companies still hold the view that shorter is better. However, as an AdEspresso experiment shows, well-constructed longer-form sponsored posts consistently outperform shorter ads. They can lower your cost per acquisition, lead to more authentic conversations, and create increased sales conversions.

Another reason why marketers have embraced long-form ads is due to Facebook announcing in 2018 that the algorithm would favor ads and content that keep users interacting, clicking, commenting, and sharing on Facebook.

When everyone starts doing the same Facebook ads in the same way, it can be disengaging. Audiences crave variety, drama, and authenticity. When you rely on the same post formats time and again, you risk your audience tuning you out.

Different factors determine the success or failure of a Facebook long-form sponsored post. Let's look at two different examples that highlight what works and what doesn't.

Facebook Sponsored Post Type 1: Present the Problem/Solution

This Facebook sponsored post is aimed at small businesses wanting to learn how to be more effective with their social media marketing and Facebook ads.

Now let's look at the individual components of this sponsored post and what makes it effective.

Call Out the Pain Point in the First Sentence

The post begins by calling out a clear pain point for readers. “Selling on Facebook doesn't have to be hard,” appeals to readers who think selling on Facebook is difficult.

Then the post clearly spells out that the advertiser has the solution to this problem: “Our Facebook & Instagram Advertising Program has everything anyone could need. 😁”

Questions to help you write this part of the ad:

• What is the problem you aim to solve?
• Why should the reader click on the See More link?

Use an Aspirational Statement in the Ad Heading

Damn Good Academy also places an aspirational statement in the ad heading: “Learn to sell effortlessly online.” Psychologically, this statement primes the interested reader to click on the ad and read the rest of the text.

Questions to help you write this part of the ad:

• What is your reader's aspiration in relation to the problem you've identified?
• What outcome are they looking for?

State Three Core Benefits

In the next few lines, the advertiser lists three compelling benefits for people who want to improve their social media ads. These benefits highlight what underlies the key problem identified in the first line—people find selling on Facebook hard.

Benefits aren't the same as features. Features talk about the product or service, whereas benefits focus on the result the customer will get from using the product or service.

Questions to help you write this part of the Facebook ad:

• What are the top three benefits your product or service offers the reader?
• What will the reader discover, learn, or transform?

Position Your Brand as the Authority

Next, Damn Good Academy positions themselves as an authority to convey expertise in this field. The ad invites the reader to explore the brands they've worked with to add further weight to their authority.

For consumers to know, like, and trust you, you need to give them confidence that working with you will provide them with the result they're after. Some options for this section are to:

• Share you've worked with high-profile brands (as in this example).
• Cite your subscriber numbers. A large subscriber base adds authority.
• Show where you've been featured in top industry or mainstream media.
• Note if you're a published best-selling author.

This information demonstrates your domain authority and establishes trust.

Questions to help you write this part of the ad:

• What gives your brand authority?
• Who have you worked with?
• What media have you been featured in?
• How many subscribers do you have?

State How You're Different From Competitors

After showing the reader their authority, Damn Good Academy positions their offering, stating how it differs from other available programs/courses. The statement, “We've found that most courses just teach how to use the tools but not how to be profitable,” clearly spells out how their offering is different.

Questions to help you write this part of the Facebook ad:

• How are you different from competitors?
• What do you offer that your competitors don't?
• How are you unique in the marketplace?

Call Out Objections

Damn Good Academy shares further benefits and addresses common objections readers may have, such as:

• Is this just another course, or how relevant is this going to be in 3 months?
• How will this make a difference?
• Do I need to be a Facebook ads expert?

By calling out reader objections in a clear and conversational manner, they're boosting their authority while also being clear that taking action on the knowledge they share is vital to success.

Questions to help you write this part of the ad:

• What kind of questions do readers ask?
• What may be stopping them from buying?
• What reasons do they have to maintain the status quo?
• How will your product or service give them breakthroughs and results in these areas?

Share Product/Program Features

Next, Damn Good Academy delivers their program's promises, explaining exactly what they'll cover. They state who the program is for: “beginner to intermediate” Facebook ads creators. They also reiterate how completing the program will enhance business performance.

Questions to help you write this part of the Facebook ad:

• What are your product's or service's promises?
• What are the main features?
• Who is the product or service for?

Wrap Up With a Friendly Sign-Off

In this example, Damn Good Academy ends their Facebook long-form sponsored post with a friendly message to the reader. I recommend that you test a version that includes the call to action within the body text, as well as one that has it just in the headline. You can do that by copying your initial ad in the Facebook Ads Manager dashboard and running an alternative version.

Use Emojis

As you can see, this ad uses a lot of emojis. Using emojis in your Facebook sponsored posts has two main benefits:

• They break up the text visually. Because you can't use bullet points or bold text in Facebook sponsored posts, this is important for long-form ads.
• They create a more casual, conversational vibe. Damn Good Academy's intended audience is the small business owner, so a conversational tone is spot on.

Include Story-Based Video Content

The video that Damn Good Academy uses in this Facebook sponsored post is unconventional and humorous. It adds spice to their post. They could have just used a talking-head video selling people on the benefits of the campaign, but they chose to use a different approach and it paid off.

A video doesn't need to be expensive or professional. Tools like Lumen5 make creating simple, story-based videos easy.

Results

This Facebook ad campaign generated a significant reduction in cost per acquisition compared to shorter-form sponsored posts that Damn Good Academy had used previously.

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Facebook Sponsored Post Type 2: Present the Hero's Journey

Author and branding specialist Ben Angel chose a long-form Facebook sponsored post because it allowed him to communicate the full message about his book.

The ad was supported by other marketing strategies including a landing page that featured numerous testimonies from doctors, psychologists, athletes, and nutritionists, as well as a 10-minute video that revealed his story and how his online program differed from others in the wellness space.

Ben's long-form post uses a completely different approach to Damn Good Academy's but achieved great results. Let's break it down.

Describe a Triggering Event to Set the Scene

Ben sets the scene for his story by sharing a triggering event. Notice that the image provides the perfect context? Here's Ben lying down on a big empty stage, something we usually associate with success and power.

The last sentence before the See More prompt leaves people hanging, which makes it more likely interested readers will click through and read the rest of the post.

Questions to help you write this part of the ad:

• What's the triggering event that spurred your journey or quest?
• When did you change course or create something new?
• What happened to set you on a different path?

Tell the Backstory

In this section, Ben shares the journey that led to this triggering event. He walks the reader through his experiences, thoughts, and feelings. In contrast to Damn Good Academy's post, this one shows a lot of vulnerability and helps the reader identify with the struggles he experienced as he points out the breakdowns that occurred along the way.

Being authentic about your setbacks can create a space for the reader to identify with you.

Questions to help you write this part of the ad:

• What is your backstory?
• What problems, experiences, thoughts, and feelings led to your triggering event?

Challenge Conventional Wisdom

Next, Ben uses storytelling to argue his main point and challenge conventional wisdom about mental health. Although he's taking the reader on a hero's journey, he's also taking a stand on how to solve the problem.

Challenging conventional wisdom is a great way to show the reader how you're different from your competitors and highlight your authority on a topic.

Questions to help you write this part of the ad:

• What are you taking a stand on?
• What conventional wisdom does your approach contradict?
• What evidence do you have to support your view?

Share Your Quest

Ben goes on to share the quest he went on to solve this problem and he dives into his discovery story. This section also further bolsters his authority because it shows the research he did for his book.

Questions to help you write this part of the ad:

• What quest did you go on?
• What obstacles did you find along the way?
• Who helped you on your journey?
• What was your “aha” moment?

State Your Results and Align Readers With Your Purpose

In this section, Ben shares his results with readers. He acknowledges people who may also be struggling with this issue and then shares his purpose.

He calls on readers to take action by sharing some key benefits they'll get out of his online program and further shows how he drew on expert knowledge to write his book and create his program.

Questions to help you write this part of your Facebook sponsored post:

• What results can you share?
• What is your purpose?
• What is your reader likely struggling with that you can acknowledge them for?
• What benefits does your product or service provide readers?
• What other information will give readers confidence in buying from you?

Call the Reader to Action and Share Outcomes

In his call to action, Ben clearly spells out what the reader will get out of his 13-week challenge and shares a link to his landing page.

Questions to help you write this part of the Facebook ad:

• What action do you want the reader to take?
• What are your product's or service's promises?

Point Out the Features

Ben spells out the program features and weaves in more benefits, including an offer and another call to action.

Questions to help you write this part of the Facebook ad:

• What are your product/service features and how do they give the reader access to clear benefits/outcomes?
• What can you provide that will make your offer a no-brainer for readers?

Add a Final Call to Action

Ben once again calls out a reader objection, reiterates his call to action, and signs off. He includes more authority statements at the end to further support why readers should trust him.

Questions to help you write this part of the ad:

• What's stopping readers from buying from you?
• How can you motivate readers to click through to your offer?
• What further evidence can you provide to show you're someone the reader can trust?

Results

Ben reported that he made nearly $250,000 in sales from this one long-form Facebook sponsored post within a 3-month period.

And even though the ad drove people directly to join the challenge and get his new book for free as part of the offer, Ben shared that an unexpected benefit was increased book sales on Amazon.

Ben said this campaign did better than any of his previous campaigns. He put this down to the in-depth audience research and testing he did at the beginning of the campaign. The ad had a high relevance score, which enabled him to lower his cost per click, increase ad spend overall, reach an audience of close to 6 million, and produce 278,000 engagements including more than 140,000 likes and 1,300 comments.

Best Practices for Long-Form Facebook Sponsored Posts

When writing long-form Facebook sponsored posts, here are a few issues you need to be aware of.

Review Facebook's Ad Policy

When creating long-form sponsored content, it pays to reference Facebook's ad policy. It's easy to make a mistake, particularly around the Personal Attributes guideline (12) or the misleading or false content policy (13). To avoid confusion, always keep this policy handy while writing your content.

Write Well-Structured and Authentic Ad Copy

Facebook sponsored posts are only effective when they're well-written. That's why I recommend you follow a structure that works for other businesses. Stay on-point, provide evidence to back up your claims, and use examples that clearly spell out the value proposition for readers.

Ben cautions that he never would have had such a huge response if he wasn't as raw and honest in his copy as he was in the book. The marketing materials need to reflect your story, even if it's full of setbacks and immense personal struggle.

Tools like Hemingway app can help you check your word usage, grammar, and punctuation. You can gauge your post's readability level on the Gunning Fog Index website.

Don't Rely on Only One Facebook Ad Type

Mix up your Facebook ad types for added variety. If you become too reliant on one ad type, you risk your intended readers scrolling past your content.

Ben used a number of different Facebook ad types across his entire campaign and tested a lot of ad formats. The profits he made from that ad didn't just appear by magic. He worked hard on his messaging, the support material, and ad testing to make the magic happen.

If the Facebook post type doesn't include the Learn More button, be sure to include clear calls to action throughout the post (not just at the end).

Conclusion

Using long-form Facebook sponsored posts adds variety and authenticity to your Facebook ads. They can help you skip a step in the buyer lifecycle, narrow down your prequalified buyers, and save money on your ads.

What do you think? Do you use long-form Facebook sponsored posts in your marketing? Share your experiences in the comments.

More articles on Facebook ads:

• Learn how to discover new audiences for your Facebook ads.
• Find seven reasons your Facebook ads don't convert.
• Discover how to create customized reports in Facebook Ads Manager.

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