said 1 year ago:
I am in need of some creative assistance.
Here’s the background:
I own and operate a mail order bagel website, http://www.new-york-bagels-shipped.com. The idea’s pretty simple; if you are craving an authentic NY-style bagel but don’t have a decent bakery nearby, you can use our website to order bagels by postal mail. We ship via USPS Priority Mail or Express Mail, and vacuum seal the packages to prevent the occurrence of mold.
I was wondering if y’all might have some ideas on how to write longer and more substantive product descriptions. Right now, all we have for each bagel is:
“Our delicious, authentic New York style [name of bagel ]“.
I was thinking maybe add the ingredients for each bagel, but would love additional thoughts.
Thank you in advance!