our new calling card for our website (3 posts)

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    roma said
    3 months, 3 weeks ago:

    server down so can’t show a thing.. off the web.. but here is a link to the video on utube.. any comments would be appreciated

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tqA09y4HrCI

    thanks roma

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    Rich Brooks said
    3 months, 3 weeks ago:

    @avatar1919

    It seems like you have to distinct offerings: mental health claims help and content creation (video, writing, etc.)

    My biggest concern is that people won’t really know what you do, because there’s seemingly little connection between those two items.

    I’m actually working with a client right now who was combining franchising help and real estate training into one business/website. I recently convinced him to split the two so he could talk more specifically to the two different audiences he needed to reach.

    Without knowing a whole lot about your company (outside of what I saw in the video), I’d recommend thinking about that possibility.

    Good luck!

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    E N Brown said
    3 months, 3 weeks ago:

    Hi @avatar1919 

    I agree with Rich @rich-brooks that having both in one video is confusing. I’d separate those items for sure. 

    I did get the idea that the mental health codes have changed and since I’ve had a dozen or so mental health professional clients that should certainly be an item of it’s own and presented as such. The date has passed for the implementation though so presenting it now should be reflected in the video as time sensitive. 

    Likewise, any examples you have for design should be labeled as such.

    Overall, I like the presentation as far as it goes. The idea of zooming in on specific items and explaining them – but mixing up the mental health in that was just not clear.

    Eileen 

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