Landing page text – long or short? (13 posts)

Topic tags: landing pages
  • Hi All,

    I have been looking at various landing pages recently, and noticed that some use very long descriptive pages (like the ones you would find here on SME), while others use very little text (like HubSpot).

    I was wondering what your thoughts were on the best practices, and what works and what doesn’t.

    Thanks,
    Sam

  • The more expensive and more complicated the product or service is the longer the sales page in general is. Opt in pages or a sales page for a short ebook and a very engaged audience can be shorter.

    Regards,Erno

    http://ernohannink.com

  • my  choice was all about the pictures….mostly  the  cover page and the tabs…..  one thing i was  sad to learn on  here is  how   little   the landing page is used…i dont  worry about my  welcome page   now….

    ..  so  most of my   work is about the   daily   posts ….im  real happy with my  cover along  with a  post pinned to the  top   and think if  a possible   customer actually  lands   and   sees it  they will be  interested…… 

    im  local  with over  3000 fairly  active  fans, my  goal is  to  get them to  drive to my store..

  • It does seem that there is a wide variation. I don’t like the long landing page for a product/service where you have to weed through a lot of chatter to even find the price… but maybe it works. 

    I’d love to hear what others have experienced on this.

  • I think it all depends on the purpose of your landing page and who your audience is. Are you just collecting email addresses or do you need to present a lot of information? @samscholfield

  • Multiple Variant landing pages are very important for testing the effectiveness of your page design, click-thru rate, conversions, etc. I think that setting up multiple landing pages are important for goals, reducing the steps in your conversion funnel, and for adding a fresh page to your site to be crawled. Setting up funnel steps on tracking software, Apps, or websites make it easy to see if your page is working, needs to be re-designed or eradicated all together. I think designing landing pages are fun, increases your creativity, and freshens up your web pages. I like to sketch landing pages in a Quad Ruled Dual-Pad with the most important stuff above the fold. Keep in mind that this is different for you industry or niche type. I would love to see some landing pages whenever anyone designs one.

    Miss Frugal Diva

    http://www.frugaldivadesignz.com

  • All very good answers – Thank you :) .

    What types of landing pages do you have on your websites? Are you going for the email capture – then sell through email, or directly selling products through your landing page?

  • @samscholfield

    Hey Sam,

    Great question.  You may have noticed that when we do a webinar, our landing pages are rather short.  That is because the barrier to entry is also very low (free).

    When we are selling a ticket to a summit (typically $297) we need to provide a lot more detail to help assist in the buying decision.

    I am writer by trade.  I used to be a copywriter (short copy) and also a white paper writer (long form copy).  So the medium also comes into play here as well.

    However, having tested this extensively, for paid products long form copy ALWAYS out performs short copy.  The key is to have lot’s of breaks and subheads so folks can easily skip to the next section visually.  In addition, augmenting your copy with video is also helpful.

    Here is some helpful reading: http://www.marketingexperiments.com/improving-website-conversion/landing-page-assessment.html

  • Hi Mike, @mike-stelzner

    Thanks for the link. The analysis they have conducted is very interesting.

    I’m curious – if you were advising someone without the writing background, would you be inclined to recommend they hire a writer? Or use a different approach such as a video introduction / walk through?

    Thanks!
    Sam

  • @samscholfield

    Both.  Hire a writer and do a video

  • Haha ok good response :) @mike-stelzner

  • @mike-stelzner @samscholfield

    Awesome report, Mike! So glad Sam asked this question. I was sitting down with a Landing Page I had trashed last night… trying to think outside the box… when I obviously needed to think inside the box and throw the distracting junk out!

    Very timely… I’ll be printing this one out.

    Robin Carlisle

  • @atlantarobin

    Thanks Robin!


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