said 3 months, 4 weeks ago:
Hi @avatar1919 I know the server has been down so I haven’t been able to get in here and reply. Are you looking for feedback on this video itself? If so, I’m going to move it to Small Business since that’s more of our catch-all.
But my feedback is I had a little disconnect between the Medical Health Examiner and then the farm video in the middle of it. I know you were trying to showcase your video production side but I might break the billing and claims part and the video production part into two separate videos.
I also think that it would be more powerful if you talked about what you do yourself so people can get to know you more as you do the video.
I also think that you need more of how this will help your clients – this is all the features with none of the benefits. What are people getting with this if they work with you – how does it help their business? I always like to think of the “so that…” statement.
I help you create and manage webinars for you “so that” you can make more money and be a rock star……
I like the graphics and things behind it. Would love to hear what others thing too.