What Problems Do U See With This FB Page (4 posts)

  • Hi guys — need some feedback on what you see wrong or good with this fb personal page & fb biz page based on objectives below…

    Objective:

    * to build an optin list of potential free coaching clients to be able to follow up on

    * To do facebook marketing to recruit new people interested in real estate investing foreclosure Free Training  !

    * maximize existing 1000 friends and their friends to look into the opportunity being offered by visiting FB Biz Page

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    1) Fb personal page – What changes you would recommend and why?

    2) Fb biz page – What changes you would recommend and why?

    ( Fb biz page ) http://www.facebook.com/pages/Sams-Connection-Sam-Underwood/162912510387880

    ( personal page ) http://www.facebook.com/samuel.e.underwood

  • As I’m not a friend of yours it’s difficult to comment on your personal profile as I couldn’t see all of it.  However neither had a cover picture so you are missing out on a branding opportunity & not presenting a professional/business face to your potential clients.  Your biz page isn’t linked to your personal profile so when people click on your occupation on your personal profile the go to an empty community page rather than your business page.  I’m happy to give you a more in depth critique if you message me.

  • not having a cover picture looks really strange now. Funny how things have changed.
    I would not look at the page in general because there are no updates, it is just an empty FB shell, waiting for something to be done.

    Remember whatever is on your perso page will reflect on the biz page. Make sure you have the matching message on both.

  • Hello Sam,
    here are some ideas for your biz page:

    • you don’t utilize the tabs…why don’t you have a “sign up for a newsletter tab” or a “free training” tab that directs you to a sub-page where people can sign up?
    • if I go on your biz FB page, in the info box, there is no info about your page, just a phone number…what is the reason I just “like” this page?
    • your profile photo is a bit dark in quality, the smile is a good choice, but try to brighten it up a bit…also although you look dashing on the pic…the white coarse wall in the background is a bit “amateur”…for a personal profile photo it is fine, but for a biz FB page, you should use a professional photo if you want people to take you seriously…I would advise to change it asap
    • you should also use milestones on the profile…when did you establish your business etc.?
    • also highlight a post with the current offer…but don’t over-promote yourself…make some interesting quality(!) posts, articles about real-estates – a reason why I would be interested to get updates from you in my newsfeed, even if you have only 21 likes so far…fill up the page with good content!
    • there is no external website included…it is always weird if a company does not include their own website on their page
    Just couple of ideas that came to my mind…I hope your business will boom very soon and wish you all the best!

    Sasha


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