Hello fellow Facebook pros. This is Jerry I just set up a business facebook page.

Could you please visit and give some fedback.  Please help. I am a newbie to internet markeing.

Facebook pae    http://www.facebook.com/WheelOfLifeSuccess

Thanks

Jerry

Oh you need better graphics mate…the wheel of life is unreadable in your profile picture and your timeline looks sloppy coz it isn’t high enough resolution.

Pin a post to the top of the page too that explains exactly what your business is all about and use a nice graphic to help support the text re what it is you do.

I don’t know what you do from the quick look i had…i couldn’t tell you other than it has to do with balancing everything in life?????

So clearly define what it is you do and then put forward your biggest BENEFITS AT THE TOP OF THE TIMELINE PAGE!

@wheeloflife247 I do like your about section since it tells more about your mission but the profile picture does need to be clearer.  It looks clear in the wall picture but make sure it can scale to 180 x 180 pixels.  
I also think you need a few more posts – all I see is a post about online games and it looks like advertising.  I’m a little nervous to click on it because I really don’t even understand what it is about before clicking.  

Do you have a website?  If so, make sure you link to it.  I think having a website is a good thing to do even if you don’t have one now, think about creating on.  It gives your whole page more legitimacy and gives people a way to learn more about you.  

@wheeloflife247 You’ve already gotten some great advice here, but I would add maybe changing your Timeline cover image entirely, to real people who are happy and successful, etc., to give your page a more warm and inviting, less “corporate,” feel.

As you begin adding content, I would definitely, as someone suggested above, illustrate real-world results from folks who have implemented the “wheel of life” philosophy into their daily lives.  That way, when someone lands on your page, they’re immediately intrigued by and interested in your content, and they stick around to read more. 

I would also begin adding your apps to the page — Notes, Events, your other social media profiles if you have them, an email opt-in form for whatever free offer you plan to have at your website, etc., or just whatever you think is appropriate for your target audience.  Adding a few apps there — you can have 12 total, 4 above the fold (these are the ones that show on the page) and 8 below the fold (those you see when you click the down arrow) — would make your page more visually appealing.

Of course you’re just getting started, and you’ve got a good start! Being active here in the forums here will also help you tons!  : )

Good luck!