said 10 months, 2 weeks ago:
@wheeloflife247 You’ve already gotten some great advice here, but I would add maybe changing your Timeline cover image entirely, to real people who are happy and successful, etc., to give your page a more warm and inviting, less “corporate,” feel.
As you begin adding content, I would definitely, as someone suggested above, illustrate real-world results from folks who have implemented the “wheel of life” philosophy into their daily lives. That way, when someone lands on your page, they’re immediately intrigued by and interested in your content, and they stick around to read more.
I would also begin adding your apps to the page — Notes, Events, your other social media profiles if you have them, an email opt-in form for whatever free offer you plan to have at your website, etc., or just whatever you think is appropriate for your target audience. Adding a few apps there — you can have 12 total, 4 above the fold (these are the ones that show on the page) and 8 below the fold (those you see when you click the down arrow) — would make your page more visually appealing.
Of course you’re just getting started, and you’ve got a good start! Being active here in the forums here will also help you tons! : )