Just wait 2 more days until the new Timeline for Facebook Pages is said to come out, this should change your layout dramatically.RegardsUwe

Ok Simon I looked at it and here are my thoughts:

Change your settings to show everyone instead of just your posts, it’s visible word of mouth advertising.. even if it’s not there yet.
I suggest shortening your about section so that there is no ‘more..’ button, If someone wanted more info you would want then to go to the info tab on your page, where they can read all about you.
I am sure that you are personally on Facebook so use the share button on the bottom left, friends and family will help you get to 25 if you ask and when you get there be sure to set your custom url.. everyone forgets.
When you post an update with an article be sure to delete the original link you used after FB connects your article to your post. It is just unnecessary to have multiple links, and almost all link content is edit-able
Those links that look like ttp://link.easy-news.com.au/v/443/e792bfa882bc51fa29a50a2f61f5e79023f1f694ea2850 can be shortened to help get your point across without being confusing to readers on your page.
Hope this helps,
If you want to critique our page I would love to hear from you Facebook.com/CrowdSmartMedia

@ashleyhydeAshley – Thanks so much for your comments! I have enabled all posts to display (I wondered about that, what I should do and how so thank you!).

And thank you for the tip on shortening/deleting the duplicates…I wondered about that too….I was not sure if I deleted my original it would remove what Facebook fetches. I will use a URL shortener too.

Your page is terrific – I am interested to see you have people land on your wall, not a welcome page…..I am inclined to agree with this approach (I know there is a debate about it) but as you make the point to me, better people see all your wall posts and those of your fans rather than splash them onto a sales page. Hummm…others will have a different view but I am with you!

I liked your page (of course) and an interesting point as a newbie to Facebook is that Liking as my business page does not give you a Like that counts in your stats – so I did both as me and my business page! An oddity I think Facebook needs to address!

Again, thanks for your time…..

Simon

@ashleyhyde ~ Thanks ~ Didn’t know that I could do this:  “When you post an update with an article be sure to delete the original link you used after FB connects your article to your post. It is just unnecessary to have multiple links”

@abigailgorton ~ good advice  

@simonjohn ~ I have people directed to a custom tab, but on that tab I also have a link to my wall (since some people don’t realize they can look at the wall without clicking “Like”).

@dedimason Thanks Dedi for your tip…..I am learning, that is for sure.

@ashleyhydeThanks for the followup Ahsley….I’ll be really interested to see how the Timeline view changes things and once that happens I will review the options then. Just when I thought I was getting the hang of it too!