Erno Hannink said
8 months ago: Hi Michaele, some of the things you are asking have to do with personal taste. Colors and how it looks is important to understand what your target audience likes.
Looking at your site these are some of the things I notice:
- the top part is filled with big (stock) images. Very business, boring, like. The text that I want to read is below the fold for me. I need to scroll to see what this is site and your business is really about. People will hit the ‘Back’ button before they scroll down.
- in the text you talk about “top-notch website design” , I don’t see this in this site. This looks like a basic WordPress theme – and it is http://themeforest.net/item/office-responsive-business-theme/1718861
- Using words that are more descriptive then “Click here” will help the visitor to click the link and search engines to understand what the page is about i.e. “Learn more about Voice your web”- How do your 500+ connections on LinkedIn help me as your client. Will you use your connections to get me more clients?- box testimonials is empty
- I would not use the words “social media guru” – these are words that other people should say about you- who is your potential client?
Hope this helps and doesn’t hurt too much.
Warm regards,Erno